Will each one of these relationships be very clear towards visitor?

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Creola:
I explained i was an old friend and owed her my life since she disuaded me from suicide etc and explained how much she loves and respects him.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
He threatens to kill me and her.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
Her husband goes thru her phone and contacts me.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
I left my job and comforted her from afar, contacted her friends and family and begged them to stay close to her.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
She tried to suicide twice and went into a catatonic state.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
I got pissed and threatened to hurt her family.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
One day she agreed to have sex then changed her mind.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
She had a crazy plan to run away from him and i disuaded her etc.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
She had issues with him, neglected, mistreated, no sex etc.
(14 April 2017)

Creola:
She insisted that we stay friends but with her husband watching over her back was still a waste of time and just fruitless.
(14 April 2017)